HT de Beer
1/15/2006 2:14:00 PM
anne001 wrote:
>>I've found either don't go far enough or spend too long
>>telling stories (sorry Why)
>
> What you are proposing seems to me to have too many words, and to
> suggest something so basic, it won't go anywhere fast.
I think she is right here. The biggest problem with writing texts for
beginners is that there is no stereotype beginner. So to attract a bigger
audience, you will have to write somewhat more general and compact than you
have proposed.
Furthermore, to attract people to your text and keep them attracted, you
have to give them a reason to read on. Going into details of many
variations of the 'hello world!' program is not going to work. I can advise
you to work towards a `real' program as fast as possible and inform the
reader about the real program.
Besides that, people who already know how to program and are willing to
learn Ruby, won't like to be treated as complete nitwits. Complete nitwits,
on the other hand, who want to learn programming and are using Ruby as
their first language, may like your proposed style. Unfortunately, I do not
know if it is the best way to learn programming, it seems to me too much
focused on details of ruby and too less on programming in general.
So try to find out who your audience is, and write for them. Let them
regularly read your text, and use their remarks to improve your text.
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HT de Beer